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You Think Your Smart

You think you are smart
You think you have me beat
But listen to this Mike;
You may want to take a seat

Every time you try to
Attack me with your words
You should know by now, you will lose
And it's your fault, for this you choose.

You try to turn my kids against me
You try to put me in jail
Dumbass, why can't you see
You always fail

Stop being like this, grow up
I am done with you
But again, you have fucked up
This you will see is true

Back off my kids
I don't know what they did
For you to to this

I think i better quit!!!!

Author notes

just letting out the anger from within
Before I put a gun to his chin
Thanks for reading
Tammy
Written July 8th, 2005

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  • maz1974
    July 19, 2005
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    Very good....better to write it down instead of screaming and shouting....I think I should try that next time!!!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 9, 2005
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    Always feels good to let off some steam, and you've done that well...I'm concerned about you, so know if ya need me, I'm there!

    -Timothy

  • cora
    July 8, 2005
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    exellent

    hey nice write. feelings are hard to control so is heartache. good luck. i'm a new writer. i've only wrote one poem and it was for my boys. there my world so i know where your coming from. keep up the good work and keep those kids safe with your love. cora


  • Proud Mommy
    July 8, 2005
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    awww, thanks Nicole. And I am okay, its my kids that I worry about. They have to go back over there today. I hate it...and yes the meeting went very well for me, i will talk to you about that later.
    Love ya sis,
    Tammy


  • July 8, 2005
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    Great job, hun. This is a constructive way to get what he's doing to you off your chest. I hope the meeting yesterday went well. I just want you to know that I'm always here if you need someone. Lots of love to you and yours,
    ~*~Nicole~*~

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