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The Key to the Magic

Abracadabra,Hermione is my name
Hogwarts and magic with Harry is the game
Secrets throughout this fairytale place
Wizard Cards and Jelly Beans is the beginning of the race
Against Magic swords that swiftly pierce the Evil one
Riding on broomsticks a challenge to be won
Quidditch is the Magic game to catch the Golden Snitch
They will not let me play the game that is why
I am only a Witch
I am excellent at casting spells and top at wizardry
But I cannot beat Harry for he is a master of all to be.

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Written July 8th, 2005

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  • Corinthians13-4
    July 26, 2007

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    I like the rhyme with this write; nice flow too. Shorter lines usually make a poem easier to read, but I'm bad like that, so I don't really mind. Good job.


  • robert bolin
    July 23, 2005
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    This is a really good rite fits to the books and the movies and I have hermione is the best wich of all ...great rite..thanks for letting me read your work..

  • meena krish
    July 17, 2005
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    Interesting read this is..making the reader's tongue twist and turn...good one. Keep writing~