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This image I used was strangely inviting text, since it was actually and merely a fallen web cam out of focus. Or could it have been a fraction of heavenly light crashing through my earthly zone? Needless to say, it was amazing , and there was no choice but to use it as an ideal backdrop for writing about this classic event that changes the world and hearts!
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Written December 15th, 2002
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WOW, Very beautiful, TO me this is one of the greatest moments in time.You have captured that moment with amazement. THankyou for sharing poet. -
this is calm and deep and maybe its just the background but it seems almost mysterious........ me likey
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This was wonderful, Diane. You told the story with such style and grace. Splendid and the the story behind the backdrop was very unique. As always, you never disappoint us with your work. Best wishes~vj
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Very good!!! I very much enjoyed it. Are those snowflakes falling in the backround? If so that is very neat. Great Write!
Safely hidden in the darkness,
~ The Rocker who lost all aka Sacred Shadows -
marvelous, spiritual write
An important biblical event that changed the course of history for all mankind on earth and in Heaven!The Angel Gabriel said to the Virgin Mary-'Hail Mary,full of grace,the Lord is with thee;Blessed art thou,amongst women and blessed is the fruit of thy womb- Jesus!'This celestial message is the turning point in our life on earth and thereafter and paves the way for the birth of Jesus on christmas day!A great message has been aptly displayed in a good poetic manner coinciding with Christmas day!good thinking and fine inspired, spiritual work to remind mankind that Christmas is something MORE than a worldly celebration.It is a 'REBORN SOUL' that has been redeemed from the scourges of sin and hell!great write. -
I see The beautiful light
i like this very much, and to say that the image was merely a fallen web cam! lol that is creative very creative indeed. this is a piece to cherish and to be proud of. i love it! great work. God bless you!
Vanessa -
great!
Awesome! It is very...very...I don't know a word for it. Great doesn't explain it well enough. Not to mention the bg and format! sweetsweetsweet!
-Insignificant Me -
awesome awesome poem. I like the background. Great job! Keep writing!
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nice poem, I liked the background a lot too. Very calming... great job. The rhyming was so good too! Keep writing... ~overachiever -
OH yes, I read this before...such a wonderful write.
Sam
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wow....this is truly amazing.
I really enjoyed it!
Sam
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I take it the 'Abuse' catagory is wrong?
This is so wonderful, damn almost packing to go to church.
I believe in the almighty I have faith that he believes in me.
LL -
excellent
ahhhh, we all know you planned the whole thing!! ;) just as barbara said, you always have such calming words... speaking of hope and the like. placing mighty ol' razoodocks in my vesch, righto? sorry... thinkin bout the old clockwork orange and the british/russian gutter talk is gettin to me. great write, and a nice background ;) take care auntie -
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If i'm not careful you'll have me converted! Lovely calming words.. you do have that effect on me..
Barbxx -
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i actually find the fact that it's an out of focus webcam to be hilarious. it's a beautiful poem though, and you should be VERY proud.
Matt -
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Amen, the glory of this dawn bestow's us all! -
Thank you one and all for such specific comments..it makes a difference. It adds to my vision of it!!
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ohhh wow, I need to grace you wonderful pages more often, you are truely an inspiration, you really moved me with this write, very beautiful imagery, and the message was even moreso, absolutely perfect, , thank you Cookie, I hope to become a good friend of yours, if this is the sort of person you are, WOW!!!!, simply amazing,
sincerely,
joe -
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very inspiring...I dont think that I have read a poem quiet like it...the verbage used was brilliant, what a well thought out poem..truly a masterpiece ~~Jenn -
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funny how something as innocuous as an out of focus picture can inspire such wonderful poetry! blessings and good tidings to you and yours for the holiday season! -
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*hugz* I like this and about the poem graceful. no real meaning someone asked me to write about unicorns protectiong the earth and thats all I came up with... hmmm .... -
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The background and the poem were so magnificent ,I had tears in my eyes as I write a lot of spiritual poetry.Must take lessons from you.Awe-inspiring. -
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Auntie Cookie this is lovely sweetie, has a lovely flow to it and to be chosen like that as you write about the angel coming to Mary to let her carry Jesus is pretty special.....God musta really loved her to carry His son........Hugs and love, Sherry -
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C, you have crafted a wonderful, spiritual poem. Beautiful and so reverent. Excellent write. -
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The picture is perfect, and the poem is as beautiful as ever. I like 'crescent wings enshroud the room'. That is such a wonderful image. Thanks! -
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I am delighted by the background, the Message, and also, the admiration in your heart. Well done, Poetess ... -
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Wonderful...wonderful...wonderful and now I am lost for words...such a encouragement...
Happy Christmas to you and yours
Jesus Is Lord God Bless and Shalom...
disciple -
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love it - liturgical poetry is hard to write; really, really well done. the structure is perfect. -
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amazing
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