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Habitation - a senyru

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the Lord Jesus Christ
inhabits my flesh and soul
spirit rejoices

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If you live in Christ, your spirit rejoices even in the dark moments of your live. He is my Everything!
Written July 7th, 2005

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  • Wesside
    June 23, 2006
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    Though I'm not Christian, this piece has a certain level of serenity that can't be debated. Not complicated, just 'here it is'. Good write.

    Score: 8.4

  • Jocelyn Davis
    July 23, 2005
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    YES!
    I can't say more-- yet I could say tons. I choose the former because there's no room for the latter.

    GREAT TRUTH

    --Jocelyn


  • Vickie J
    July 8, 2005
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    Briefly worded but very complete! Great job, Joanne!!! vj


  • Samplette gold member
    July 8, 2005
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    This is a beautiful senyru...I am blessed that the Lord has given me a heart that is accepting to His love and forgiveness...He is so awesome!! My Everything as well. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam


  • July 8, 2005
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    Very lovely,short and to the point(I guess thats why its a senryu),the picture is beautiful andI'm sure the lord appreciates the kind jesture.Keep up the good work.


  • cubert
    July 8, 2005
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    Always a sensational gift to see someone rejoicing their faith in poetry! It is a lovely write!! Well done!


  • Pejj
    July 8, 2005
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    Bravo! Well done!

    Hello! Your image is very nice! And your senyru is very well done! Best wishes! Pejj

  • easy writer
    July 8, 2005
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    You said a lot in so little. It makes sense it was beautiful.


  • myron silver member
    July 8, 2005
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    thanks ...


  • Dark-Huntress
    July 8, 2005
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    i like this short simple and to the point. you wrote beautifully in not so many words. good job and good luck in the contest.
    Jenna


  • thelordreigns gold member
    July 8, 2005
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    Thank you Belle....a senyru is just like a haiku only it talks about human nature not physical nature. I really don't distinguish between the two, but if I don't label my poems correctly according to some poets, I get comments correcting me - so.....I am happy calling this a senyru (but I really still think it's haiku) - just a secret between you and me....anyhow, I'm glad you liked the poem. Hugs from CT - joanne

  • Belle
    July 8, 2005
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    So a senyru is what? Like a haiku? I like this.


  • SimpleSarcasm
    July 8, 2005
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    Very nice senyru. Good luck in the contest.

    ~Dee


  • thelordreigns gold member
    July 8, 2005
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    Yes...he is a miracle working God!


  • Blazing White Wolf
    July 8, 2005
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    beautifully but you said all there is to say in those few precise words great job
    love and light
    Blaze

  • poeticgenius44
    July 8, 2005
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    great picture, yes I agree God is truly the reason I amm no longer a crack addict, he has done miracles in my life, thanks for this short but heart filled poem and picture, excellent!! May God always smile down on you!!


  • Anna Emkah
    July 8, 2005
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    I agree with you completely. Nice Senyru. Good luck in the contest.


  • astralshepherd gold member
    July 7, 2005
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    An interesting reflection on the picture in a lovley Haiku. Good luck in the contest. Blessings and best wishes, ~richard

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