let me count the reasons that i have found
to wake up everyday just to see your face
when you smile i definitely know one thing
when i am in your arms i am in the right place
i have one thought of where i want take you
to the personal heaven of your dreams
allow you to live your life in my heart
as i only hope you know what my love means
the words i could tell you
would never explain how i feel
as you are my one and only
you open wounds are the ones i want to heal
when my soul finally departs you
i want you to know i am still here
my i love yours are more then you think
as we will be together again there is no reason to fear
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Written July 7th, 2005
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awww this is beautiful, so touching i absolutely love it!! the rhyming is great, and this piece just says so much about love and what youd do for one person who means that much. Great job never stop writing, keep up the good work!! xXxXx <3 *Jordan**
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This was an amazing write David, so sweet and a true honest confession of your love and how pure your feels towards Kim are. The emotion you put into this was straight from your heart and showed through your greatly pinned words. Keep writing, I loved it immensely. -Heather
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aw honey this is so amazing! its really beautiful and written for a very lucky person. this is probably one of my favourites by you...i really love it
aww sweet, keep writing youre brilliant
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awww baby i love this my fav. verse is
let me count the reasons that i have found
to wake up everyday just to see your face
when you smile i definitely know one thing
when i am in your arms i am in the right place
i have to say that this one was my fav. well actually i liked the whole thing but the first verse lets me know alot...love ya babe kim -
great poem i liked it alot keep up the good work
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