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Small Fry

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Small fry was a curious seal
his shiny coat was shiny black
one day his maw went a fishing
so sad, she never did come back

He swam around lost for hours
then laid upon the sandy beach
safe from all of the predators
now safe and sound out of reach

He slept away the dark of night
til the sunrise neared again 
soon waves washed upon him
as the high tide reappeared

He saw he had been stranded
on an island beach all alone
the safety of his mother's love
the only thing he had known

Something floating in the water  
swimming very very slow
it was not going anywhere
stuck in the dreadful undertow

Small fry jumped in the water
swam fast towards what he saw
then he heard another seal say
please help me I am your maw

As small fry reached his mother
then they both quickly swam away
his adventure was now over
they swam together in the bay  

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I chose option #2 Animals.
Written July 7th, 2005

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  • Autumn Whisper
    October 22, 2005
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    Great poem snadygram, wonderful picture in my mind to nice one
    great poem once again
    best wishes as always
    -Cool Oasis-

  • Sandygram silver member
    July 10, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you Michael for the nice comment. As always I appreciate it. Take care, Sandy

  • Ruby Petal
    July 8, 2005
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    Cute!!!!!!

    Awwwww!!!!!!! U took a look at my authors page!!! ( ure the 1st 2 do so) Its very cute and the rhyme is perfect!!! And I luv the cute picture!!!! Its soooo cute!!! Thanks for taking ure time to read my authors page!!! Great rite and good luck in the contest!!!

    Hugs
    MaryAnn
  • Linda Sue silver member
    July 8, 2005
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    My "Seal" of Approval

    This is really cute. I love your children's poems. Good luck in the contest! Love. Linny

  • Arsenic-
    July 8, 2005
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    Very cute sotry, and well rhymed. Nice to see a light and refreshing write.
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