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To: Elisa, From Michael

What you will see inside… is something very special. There isn't’t another like it, or are they’re any duplicates. This thing is very rare indeed, and it is luckier to be in your possession then you possessing it. This thing will not fade, nor tarnish, as it has a lifetime guarantee. Though, if by some chance, it were to break…. You will never be able to replace it with it being the same. As it takes time to be repaired, but if so desired and the circumstances right, you shall be able to obtain this item once again, if you or it so desires. If by some chance, you were to loose this item… you will still always possess it with you. As it is declared here and now, this item will never be completely lost to you. What this thing is… is my heart. My heart belongs to you, and no one else, and it shall be for all eternity. I love you so much… I can’t wait till the day, were I am able to express it without hesitation.

Author notes

This is actualy only one part of two that I wrote for my Gf. The other is more personal and really only her and I would get most of it. I may end up posting, but edited.
Written July 7th, 2005

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