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Diana

She flows,     silent water
ebbing,    cresting   - -  with moonlit glow
like Braille, her words        they touch me back, low;
sensual ancient and - oh!

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Inspired by masterblaster.
I bow to my mistress.

'silent water' I learned from Danton Remoto.
Written July 6th, 2005

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  • masterblaster gold member
    July 6, 2005
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    Hi, thanks a million my friend, very flattering, I don't normally use this word but wow, again thanks a million, a very big hug Di