Yelling and screaming running all through the house
Hitting punching pushing each other around
Sisters always fight
But not like this
It was all the time
Never a happy moment between them two
So one went out for a couple of drinks
Just to cool off
Let of some steam
I guess she had a little two much to drink
Got in a car and raced up the street
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Back in the house the other was mad
Hating the other sister so bad
She storms out
Goes for a walk to cool down
Anger blurring her vision
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She has her foot all the way to the floor
Taking the turns as they come at her
Not really knowing what is happening
It happened so fast
the girl came out of nowhere
She couldn't stop
Sirens
Cops
A stretcher
Her eyes close
Shes passed out
When she woke up she was in a hospital bed
A curtain dividing her room in half
Loud noises coming from the other half
We are losing her!
She leaving us!
CLEAR!
Nope still nothing
Shes gone
There's nothing we can do
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She pulls open the sheet and gasps as she looks at the pale bruised face on the bed
It could have been anybody
But it was one person
The person she didn't think to see
Her sister
The one she had argued with!
Her life ended that fast
She jumps out her bed and clasped on her sister
Tears falling like a storm
There's more yelling and screaming
But this time its different
Not screaming from anger
But screaming from pain
She will never see her sister again
Author notes
I commented on your poem Ian's Story!
Dont drink and drive(get a designated driver!!)
Written July 6th, 2005
A contest entry
- hardcore sad sh*t by choke-on-the-truth.
300 points, ended July 23, 2005, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hey baby gurl!! that was a good one too!! Drinking and Driving is so stupid!! That was really good stuff like that makes me realize how stupid it is tp drink and drive!! I love ya darlin
Jessica -
ohhhhhhhh WOW!!! thats was great! i loved it.. loved how you set up the format, worked really well. this was a great write. i dont know what else to say, im speechless, great job. keep up the good work. all the best, and take care!
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thankx! i hope you injoyed it!!!!
~*CASEY*~ -
Great message delivered in a very moving poem. Best of luck in the contest.
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thankx SO much! im glad you liked it! thankx for taking the time to comment on it!!!!
~*CASEY*~ -
holy shit! I can't imagine that happening to anyone. and the irony of it is that no matter how much we fight w/ someone, we still love them. sometimes, we just don't know how to show them we love them. I loved this!
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aww darlin this is really good!!! i hate drinking and driving! i put my brother in jail! it is never a good thing!! i love this boo! XOXOX
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