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Orange Paint and Celtic Crosses

The clouds brew in the distance
Deceiving our eyes as back-wood galaxies
What is it that lingers at the other end of the bay?
Vast oceans coating derelict mirror images
I wonder if there's really nothing to see here
...It's all so keen here...

Parting like the Red Sea
Amicable sailors tipping their hats to wheedle their way in to the hearts of the peasants
Butter up, give a little spring in their step
Friendship can only go so far

I see so much more now when I look at the night sky
Wondering if the stars are really billions of light years away, or if it's the other way around
Vacancy doesn't know how to lie
It's just the offspring of desolation
How can innocence be so bitter?

So much shame fastened to the tangerine walls
The colours know not to collide
It's only in our minds, he said
...he said a lot of things...
Rusted closed are the doorknobs of my soul
Heart strings improvising as bungee cords
Tight, but not tight enough
It's possible to fit through

I watched the floral wreath wilt as you entwined your hands with mine
I saw the hemp rug mummify as you pressed your warm lips to my clavicle
I watched it all, and I didn't stop it
Who could?

That feeling runs through me every time I step through the smog
An emotional mix of dry swallowing a pill and swiping notebook paper across your arm hairs
Chilling
You can picture yourself there again

A snapshot - a glimpse of light and time
A flash - a moment of perfect equilibrium
Throwing the Earth just a little more off Her axis

Some days it's wanting, some yearning, some complete and utter disgust
I've yet to reach hate
I've yet to reach a safe plateau where the very photograph of him doesn't brand tear-drop chemicals into my skin
I'm not there, no
But I can't be too far off





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Nothing, really. Just words.
Written July 6th, 2005

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  • silver-X-lining gold member
    April 19, 2008

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    "So much shame fastened to the tangerine walls
    The colours know not to collide
    It's only in our minds, he said
    ...he said a lot of things..."

    I love this piece as well... and I can relate to these feelings. Your word usage is again superb; and you express these tangled emotions so very well...
    "Some days it's wanting, some yearning, some complete and utter disgust" and "How can innocence be so bitter?"

    ~QoA


  • robert bolin
    August 20, 2006
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    When words are pulled out of the heart so beautifully a poets quill soars unto the stars in enchantment like a heavenly lullabye, Knowing that the next song available will that of the choir in which we all will be singing in the end... Again beautifully and emotionally powerful thank you for allowing me to read and comment on your work..


  • Eternal-Mortal
    July 9, 2005
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    Well hell they must b pretty special words if that's all they r! I loved the part about the stars bein far away, or maybe not. That was SWEET! Amazin poem. It was long and fun 2 read every line

    EM

  • Mia Donna
    July 6, 2005
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    This is very much more than just words. It's all descriptions. And you took all these descriptions into one poem and they all mean something. It's a very powerful write. I very much love the end. And some favourite lines:
    "Wondering if the stars are really billions of light years away, or if it's the other way around" Good point.
    "Rusted closed are the doorknobs of my soul" Very nice metaphor.
    Great job overall!


  • Yummy Cinnamon Bun
    July 6, 2005
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    you say just words but their not just words their beautiful words full of heart and soul. this is amazing kels my love. you are such an amazing poet. and the perfect friend. your words touch me everytime i read them...you are such a great person. keep up the perfect work. i love you!

    erynn

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