wanna scream when they look at you
wanna scream as they hold on to you
wanna scream as they take you down
wanna scream as they keep you still
need to move
need to breathe
whats their problem,
wont let me leave
take me down where im alive...
not where i stay covered
save me, let me leave, give me air to breathe
wanna shake them out my life
but all they do is follow
need to shake them out my face
they'll find out their hearts are hollow
save me, let me leave, give me air to breathe
in years from now they'll realise they are making me scream....
wanna scream when they look at you
wanna scream as they hold on to you
wanna scream as they take you down
wanna scream as they keep you still
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Written July 6th, 2005
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i love the way its set out... u r really gr8 poetess... an i can actually say poetess because uve probabaly written more beautiful poems than professional poets have... all your poems are so insparational... and delicately set out as to give the best possible effect. ur poems r the only ones that have made me cry... ur poems r the ones that can make me cry.. no ones elses can do that... u r special.. u have a great talent for writing poems... u were the reason i joined this site.. and u were the insparation for me to start writing poems...and ur opinion of me is what i find so crucial for me to continue to write... even now i still hold u in highest respect... i hope u find what ur lookin for out there... and i hope i can still be there to see ur success
Edited on Dec 13, 6:46 because ''.
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