I'm an understanding person,
I also speak my mind,
You're a very awesome girl,
Unique and one of a kind.
I can't stop thinking of you,
Can't get you outta my head,
I think I'm falling for you,
When we're apart, my heart feels kinda dead.
I understand you're afraid,
You've been broken-hearted in the past,
I'm not in this to get laid,
And hopefully, this can last.
It may just be me,
But I think we are right for each other,
The good times we've had,
I hope we can have another.
I'll be there for you,
and hold you in my arms,
Comforting, caring,
I have lots of love that I feel like sharing.
If you don't want to do this,
I completely understand,
If you just want to be friends,
I can still hold your hand.
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Written July 6th, 2005
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very touching i liked it.
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it's awesome!! very touching!! =^-^= hehe...i liked it!!
keep it up!!
avec ai,
Riri
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This is so sweet. This would make anyone feel special.
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awww...this is such a sweet poem! her loss man! but at least you got a kool poem out of it eh?? well keep it up!
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wow will. this is a beautiful poem. i wish someone would give something like this to me. but i'm trapped with deadbeat assholes. oh well. anyway, beautiful work, and applause, definitely.
~Chels -
FUCKIN AWESOME
Dude I'm sorry...I would say I know how you feel but maybe I don't everone hurts in a different way...but talk to me man...if you need to...and this was an awesome poem. -
wow, this is sooo sweet, i wish a guy would give me this poem, then maybe ai woudlnt feel so lonely,.... i feel like the girl in ur poem, i can't jsut let myself go away with a guy, because of past relationships and stuff... so ya this is a great piece random.. i love it.. so how has your summer been so far? havent talked to you in a while... i am looking forward to readig some of your work soon..
bye bye
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Beautiful
Random, I must say, if a guy gave ME a poem like that, I'd definetly be his. I hope evertying works out for the best.
Poetrygal06 -
aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww so who's the lucky gurl eh'? this was one of the best poems i have ever read coming from you dude, and probly on-o-the best love poems ive ever read,,,,,,,,,,i guess you could say that im just a big ol' sucker for romance HAHAHA!!!!!!!!!! well keeps it up boy!! and i is be hoping that all goes well for you!!!!!!!!!! s and applause .
Luv, Britt. -
this was so sweet. i can tell you if someone gave this to me i would be theirs! good luck. keep writing!
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