I have to write
I have to let it out
Say what is bugging the $h!t out of me
I want the world to know how bad i need you
How bad i want you
Put me on the highest mountain so that everyone can hear me scream it!
I WANT YOU, I LOVE YOU, I NEED YOU, I CANT LIVE WITHOUT YOU!
Do you understand?
Did i say it clear enough?
Loud enough?
Because for the longest time i have been saying those exact words
Feeling the same way
But maybe i didn't say it loud enough or as many times as i am now
But I'm finally saying it and still nothing has happened
I have done everything i can
I have written god knows how many poems
(much like this one)
I have cried god knows how many tears
(like the ones on my face now)
I have done it A L L
but still
nothing
so here is A N O T H E R poem for you
Here are M O R E tears for you
Are you happy?!?
You have won A G A I N
You have sucked more tears and more words from me
So let me go now to live the life you gave me
(not meaning to)
............again...........over.......and.......over......again
Author notes
blah blah blah this poem is nothing but me rambling on about my PATHETIC life. it sucks(the poem and my life)
Written July 5th, 2005
A contest entry
- love that you cant have by falling through.
350 points, ended July 28, 2005, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
-
that is full of feeling you did a great job with it i am soory to here someone made you feel that way! you have a great day and happy wrightings to you
-
Gosh darlin that was good it really made me think that just was really good!! I just really like this poem!! Casey keep it up you are an excellent writer!!
Jessica -
thank you so much for your comment! i was sitting at my computer desk then all of a sudden this poem popped into my head! this is how i feel so i let it out! im glad that you liked it! and i hope it was some help to you! hope things get better!
~*CASEY*~ -
9/10
this love slash anger you have remind me of myself. i try to do everything to get this one person to just look at me, i do everything even write alot of poems/lyrics for that person telling them exactly how i feel, but they seem to not notice or not care and it makes me so upset i just want to kill them. i will say i did like this poem cause i can see where you are coming from and writing helps alot at least in my life so if this is helping you in anyway then it doesn't suck, the feeling sucks but not the work you get out of it
Arthur Is Dead
Adding your comment:
