Silent forest and blackened night,
witches wander out of sight.
Through the forest: quiet and dead,
into Her domain are they lead.
The lands of the Silver Queen,
to see what is mostly unseen.
For the Moon Goddess, she does care,
for her children, gathered and bare.
She feeds them magic and knowledge anew,
that which mortals know not but a clue.
For they are Her children, Wiccan and wise
their Goddess resides in moonlight skies.
The Woman of night will dance and pray,
making merry until the day.
They believe in karma: the law of three,
in darkest hour, merry they'll be.
So in your darkest hour, my dear
dance and dance away your fear.
Merry Meet and Merry Part,
listen, work and practice the art.
Blessed Be the Wiccan's wise,
joy and magic be their occult prize.
So dance, my witches dance,
before you fall to others trance.
Author notes
Just a poem about the life of Wiccans, with a little story behind it. Just one of my views!
Written July 5th, 2005
In a list
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A contest entry
- Your God, god(s), or goddess(s) by GirlforGod.
300 points, ended April 10, 2006, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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beautiful
I havent found alot of wiccan or pagan poems I like, and I truly enjoy yours. A wonderful piece of art. Good job!
blessed be -
I like your poem but i'm not to fimilar with the belief.... i would like to understand it more because i like to explore other religions and see where and why they happen.....
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Great write. Nice form and choice of words. The flow was perfect for this write, definetley gave it life and spoke a clear message of your belief!
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wonderful
Merry meet,
I love this poem. I have added it to my favorites (it'll show up on my paf\ge as soon as I figure out how
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The rhymes we not forced and it flowed very smoothly.
Amythest -
i realy loved this poem it is easy to read but still very effective. Having the stanzas as couplets gives you time to think after each little section making the whole thing cleaner and lovely to read.
- amz -
very good had a little of the rede in it as well, great work and nice flow, thanx for entering the contest and good luck to you.
Mortikie ~blessed be!~ -
Very "Wiccan Rede"-like. Good job. I don't know what to say, honestly. Like the couplet-formed stanzas. *Applauds and book marks*
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I just love this poem, you did a fantastic job on it.
Good luck in the contest
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Sounds like they enjoy dancing alot, and are free spirited.
Thank you for entering the contest. cake -
This poem was a nice easy read! I enjoyed reading it and am glad not to see the common misconception of devil worshipping mixed in here. Great job, the poem fit well together.
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Love It
oh wow bro I LOVE THIS POEM!!!It seem that you've touch me weak spot here
I like this kind of poem so magical and it talk about the night which I really like love ya bro
Mina
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I agree with Ivy, this is a cute poem. The little stanzas and the smooth flow give it a motherly impression. Kind of like if your mom was sitting you down and telling you a bedtime story that has a message behind it. Fable, that's the word I'm looking for...It reminds me of a fable.
Great Job!
~Dian -
THis is very cute poem. I like it simply for that. It's just a short cute way of wrapping Wicca in a nut shell. WOW!! I just can't get over how cute!! hehe!!
Keep it up!!
Hugz!!
.....Courtney -
Very nice. Portays alot with saying a little. Very nice, my friend.
Blessed be,
Ari
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