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When I Close My Eyes

When I feel blue
I know just what to do,
I close my eyes
and dream about you
in all your glory
your sparkling blue eyes
like the cloudless sky
your silky black hair
like the sky at night
so,when I feel blue
I know just what to do,
I close my eyes
and dream about you!

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Written July 5th, 2005

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  • sandy123
    March 4, 2006
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    sweet, I like this one cause I can relate to it. nice .

  • sandy123
    March 3, 2006
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    very good

    I like this one. I can relate to it. I am going to read more now. good job


  • aRdNeK
    July 5, 2005
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    Another beautiful write and another one I can relate to. When I feel sad, I do the same thing-I think about the one I love. Great job! Keep up the amazing work!