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Krishna


 My child came home tired,
  she had no energy , she cried,
  she said she wud be on leave,
  she said wud call her boss,
  negative she heard from her boss,
  as she called,i prayed,the boss should be kind,
  her sorrow disturbed my mind,
  lo, He did hear my call,
  He had given her energy,
   She said no longer sh felt tired!
  He had time for a small creature like me!

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Written July 5th, 2005

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  • laya
    July 7, 2005
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    thanx indeed,

  • ankuraa
    July 7, 2005
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    Great one amilie.
    One of ur best


  • estelm4
    July 5, 2005
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    Sweeeeeet!!!!!!!!

    Very very very nice...
    As always!


  • disciple123
    July 5, 2005
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    this is such a great poem! Its cool how God cares for all us! This is so short but so full of meaning. thanks for entering and Good luck!