There is a legend that swims with the fish,
Falls with the water, and is part of the mist.
Wash your face, in the cold fresh water,
The moment you look up, sight is upon a beautiful face of wonder.
Beam did the sun upon her brown hair,
And also on that of her snow white mare.
No shadow did lay in this valley so bright
So when you look up, everything is light.
Heavenly it is that you never wish to leave
In the pattern of life, this is a great weave.
Your eyes are enchanted, your heart starts to race,
Blood is pumping, to touch that Angelic face.
Seconds pass, as you can't help yourself,
You step into the water, they flee in stealth.
Never again do you see that face,
Never again will you feel that grace.
Obsessed you become, over those foam waters,
Back and back again you go, to sit and ponder.
Ponder the beauty of the woman and her horse,
Reminisce on the race of your beating blood pulse.
Away she fled, never to return,
Gone she went to a different world.
Blessing those who lay their eyes,
Upon the beauties that were sent from the skies.
Author notes
I read your poem (and loved it) Fallen Angel.
This was a fun contest 
Written July 5th, 2005
A contest entry
- Tell Me What You See #6 by MYownFreedom.
300 points, ended July 14, 2005, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you! That's a huge compliment coming from you
Thanks again and great contests!
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Very mystical and beautifully written...I love the story you have created here....very beautiful imagery...I would love to actually see what you wrote....Thank you so much for entering my contest...and good luck with your entry
Amy
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wow, even if I had never saw the picture I probably would have a very similiar description in my head, wow... great job.
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This is fantastic! What you see in that picture is amazing I love it! This definitely deserves some applause and some recognition. I love the first two line they have a beautiful flow so does the whole poem. Excellent job!
-Kayla
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This is a perfect poem related to the contest picture. And much more. Great descriptions pictured with a lot of feelings.
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Thanks you! You really think so? 0_o Well, thanks for the applause and the comment! Hopefully the competition won't be very... erm... competitive. I want to get enough points to make a contest of my own! Anyways, thanks again for the applause!
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OMG! What an excellent write! I read it first and then looked at the image and this is just so amazing! I think this will definetley been at favourite!! Good luck and i'll keep checking back to see how the competitions going
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