The perfect one has appeared before my eyes.
Her raven hair glistened like the night fallen moon.
Her glossy smile sparkled like the mesmerizing waters.
Her ivy green eyes told a enchanting life story.
Her passion filled kisses only made me desire for more.
Her slender figure screamed perfect in every way.
Her unique personality is a one of a kind.
Everything about her shined unbelievably enough to make me shiver and shake.
For someone hard to please,
I was stunned and had fallen to my knees.
She's the perfect one.
She's the blood in my veins,
The non-stop thought in my mind,
The very thing that keep me alive.
I never thought I'd find the perfect one,
But it seems I have proved my self wrong.
She's the perfect one.
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I have found someone... a person with a beautiful soul.
Written July 4th, 2005
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This is really good sammy.And i'm with alex i'm sorry for what happened between you two.
Mucho <3
-Ashley -
although this is a wonderful poem i was there and i know what has happened between you to im sorry about all that but itll be okay...hey the same thing happened to both of us on the same damn night aint that a kawinky dink!!!
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you did a good job at letting the reader visualize what you saw while writting this poem. Good job.
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this is really good...i feel this way about someone too...but he's a..guy..anywayz..like i told you before, congratulations...you deserve it..guys are stupid anywayz, and you don't need them....this poem is exactly what i would've wrote about that guy....you took the words out of my mouth...i hope you guys last and you don't get hurt..again...that really sux when your heart gets broken...great write
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yay good for you if this actually last's. not being mean but sometimes your fickle about people. talk to me sometimes you've missed a bunch in the last week. luv ya bunches. shittles
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this is a really good poem and now i kno how u feel bout someone and i hope thing go well wit u 2 and u deserve someone u really like much love 4rm the forgotten warrior
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