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Love

Love is good,
Love is kind
Love is gentle
Love is fine

Love is good
Love is kind
Love can make
The world go around

With a little romance
Keeps the fire burning brightly
Love will be good, and love will be kind.


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Written July 4th, 2005

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  • Roseleaf
    January 23, 2006
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    this is so very true and wishing you love to come towards you enjoyed very much

    Love Pauline xxx


  • Whispering Winds
    July 19, 2005
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    I really enjoyed this write. And I agree with you on this.

    Oh love can make the world go round....yes it can.
    Thanks for sharing.
    Tammy


  • Lori1952
    July 5, 2005
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    Eddy... that is a compliment ... that I can actually think on the same lines as you... maybe sometime we could collaborate a poem... that would be fun...
    Thanks for the comment... Hugssssss my friend Lori
    Edited on Jul 07, 9:44 p.m. because ''.

  • Just4u
    July 5, 2005
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    I had to chuckle cause those where the first two lines I said
    to myself when I saw the title...hehe...my first stanza before it opened were...

    Love is good
    Love is kind
    Love applied
    helps you unwind

    I guess we were thinking along the same lines huh...

    Hugs...Eddy


  • BluRosePoet8488
    July 4, 2005
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    AWESOME WRITE

    Lori...
    A very sweet poem. I love this. LOL! Love is many different things to different people. You have capteured the essences here. Love is... whatever you make it. Keep the fires burning brightly and the ink flowing always. Love and hugs...
    ~Donna~


  • ceegeeess
    July 4, 2005
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    so true!


    "With a little romance
    Keeps the fire burning brightly"Love is the quest for recognition and fire within kindles romance, to warm up spirit and 'two in one'feeling that nourishes the most beautiful yearning for the lover!Love feeds romance, and romance enhances love! Nice write as always, dear sweet Lori!

  • Poet7376
    July 4, 2005
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    hi lori....you got it girl..romance does keep the fires burning...very brightly indeed.....when one asks the question...what is love....there are so many answers.....love is romance...romance is love.....hugs.....Brian....

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