Your words set to music
Enchanting a symphony
Within the darkened halls
Of another’s soul.
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Pious readings
Take me under wings
While you guide my flight
In the stale midnight air
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I reach for you
Just beyond your grasp
I seem to slip away
Losing myself in this beautiful letdown.
Images of life
Burned into my soul
I peer through jaded eyes
To see the world without meaning.
Here without you
Lost in self doubt
Afraid to trust
In an unimaginable love.
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You hold me close
And I dance upon His rhymes
Wondering
How He could love someone
Like me.
My fingers trace the pages
Words from centuries ago
Still capturing hearts
As tears take on a new meaning.
Captivated in a perfect melody
Praying for a man’s love
While deciding destiny
I take flight
In the arms of a savior.
-Teresa- 6/4/05
Author notes
Personal poem, about my stuggle with being a christian and the man who did help me to find God. Still needs a bit of tweaking. Thanks to all who read. - T
Written July 4th, 2005
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Amazing
I really like this poem.
there is a lot of depth to it and that's great. It all flows nicely and isn't choppy. I really liked it. Keep it up.
~Eliza -
Great Write
I can really relate to this poem right now. I am up in ife, then I am down. It's an endless cycle. great job. -
well done
I love the beauty and saddness in this poem. It flows very well and creates the sensation of starting and stopping - being happy and sad - like the paradoxes in life. I do feel your tension and your struggle. I pray that you have found peace with this beloved and with the Savior! God bless you mightily! - joanne
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