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Forty Six Years - Sonnet 27

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She was but ten when first I met the one
Who in but nine brief years would be my wife.
And since those years together had begun,
They flowed with won'drous joy, devoid of strife.

 

And soon a child was born, and then one more,
Three girls, two boys, the last a big surprise.
In time they grew and twas not long before
The two now left had to reorganize.

 

And so, retired, we came back home to live,
To share with children and with parents here,
Because today we've still so much to give,
This mother and aspiring sonneteer.

 

From forty six long years of wedded bliss,
Susan, Michael, Sheli, Diane and Chris.

Author notes

Had our 46th wedding anniversary while on our trip, so I wrote this.  Not my favorite but says what I wanted said.
Written July 4th, 2005

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  • Scarlet Ambrosia
    July 14, 2005
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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww This is such a sweet poem you wrote for your other- half for your anniversry .........
    wonderfully penned . words and emotions woven in perfection.
    Di

  • Honeydew
    July 13, 2005
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    What a handsome groom and beautiful bride..I love your poem..it streams tears from my eyes ..46 years of loving each other..you two have truely been blessed.. to have so much time with each other not many of us get..Happy Anniversary on your 47th year!!


  • SexyAngel0418
    July 8, 2005
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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW... This is such a sweet poem AP Grampa!!! You did a great job on this one!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth

  • Lacyte
    July 7, 2005
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    This is so beautiful! Really a lovely tribute to yourself and your obviously much loved wife and children. I do hope you will have many many more such lovely years to come.


  • KevinDunn
    July 7, 2005
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    This is a very fine and beautiful poem. I have a few years to go before I can write one similar, but I pray I will be able to.


  • mitchybaby
    July 5, 2005
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    AWE!!! (wipes away the tears from my eyes) That is so so so sweet!!! And what a lovely picture, I am so glad you and Kathy found eachother. Awesome write, I'm so glad your back!!! We have so much to talk about...I got your letter in the mail, thanks for that!! I still have to send off your card, procrastination really doesn't get you anywhere hey? I will send it I promise...with a little note as well. Anyway you take care, love you lots and send my love to Kathy as well and a hug for you and one for her.

    love always,
    Sara


  • g r e y i s m
    July 5, 2005
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    hee hee. that was you both huh? interesting to see. yes, you did say what you wanted to, sometimes that is more important than being 'fancy'. your story is a great one. it's fairly rare these days I think.


    nice job,

    Lea


  • SuZyCuE
    July 5, 2005
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    What a beautiful Sonnet, 46 years how wonderful, I had my First anniversary with y hy hubby on the 3rd, (sometimes it seems much longer than that lol) I hope that we can last 46 years. Beautiful sonnet Paul.

  • SisterWitch
    July 4, 2005
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    I don't know why but this brings tears to my eyes. In a good way though. Thanks for sharing this.


  • M.A.King
    July 4, 2005
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    This warmed my heart to the core. How blessed you are to have had so many wonderful years together and still have such closeness as to inspire such a lovely sonnet like this. Touching and as eloquently penned as always.

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