“Within one lies a demon that will awaken from fear and anger. The
very same demon that lies within each of us as people. But his shall be a
demon unlike anyone has ever seen before. So he might be killed unless he
can control the demon from within him and use him for good purposed. Yet
sadly if that is done then there shall be another price to pay. A young
woman enters my mind of a strong will and a pure heart with blood soaked
hands. Why do you cry young one? Is all that you know a lie? If so what
will you do? Will you live this lie so that the young man and you can
live happily ever after? Will? Wait! Another young woman enters my mind…
there is mischief in the family! Does Davidais threaten all that you care
for? All three shall make a decision that will determine the fate of
others."
-This comes from the man known only as the last PR, End of times
Author notes
prologue from Eternity Part 2...I just started writing this...I'm having some transition probblems...but I almost have them figured out...so hopefully I'll have more than two chapters of part 2 done
Written July 4th, 2005
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This is awesome! very well written- It is very deep and enticing. It flows very well and tells the reader enough to somewhat follow, but not enough for them to fully get the plot- but thats good because it intigues them to read ahead.
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