You see this girl
staring at herself in the mirror
you want to know why
she keeps all her secrets
and tells you only lies
She wears her makeup
to hide all the emotions
that are burried
not too far inside
As she smiles
she tells you she's fine
but all she wants to do is hide
Little girl
it will be fine
right now you are sad
but in time you will heal
little girl
trust me
I know how you feel
Author notes
I know not the greatest.. but I needed to write..
Written July 4th, 2005
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great job.
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very good write, perfect layout and feel better writing it ? well either way this is a brilliant poem keep it up
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i love it
i understand this poem very well, a very good write i will say, something about this grabs me i just can't pinpoint it at the moment. keep it up. -
What do you mean its not the greatset I think its just fine. Im just wondering whos the little girl
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its always good to do some writing just to clear your mind, and over thinking some poems doesn't help, so i say good job, it had a very nice rhyming flow, and just great
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