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the unfinished sadness part four

do you have the time for me?
how blunt do i have to be
when i say i want a man to take care of?
i'm full of love
i need a man to give it to.
i love what we do
behind closed doors.

Author notes

siblings beware..contains references to me and rob..well.you get it...
Written July 4th, 2005

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  • UnFoRgIvEnSINS
    July 5, 2005
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    i don't know...i just post them when i come up with them....they just come to me..out of nowhere...there isn't even anything going on between us..these are all old poems.


  • Stac
    July 4, 2005
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    well...i'm a sibling and i must say..it wasn't that bad. How many of these are you going to keep up?