I wonder if you know it stops raining for you.
The sky changes itself when you walk out the door.
The lights turn green
as you approach them
in hopes that you will get near or pass by.
You are the only reason the sky doesn't fall
down upon all of our lives.
Could you ever guess the moon shines for you,
bringing light like you always do?
Every bell tolls
with all the power in its soul.
One day the sirens will blare for you.
And then it will begin to rain.
The clouds will cry as will the rest,
but I refuse to.
Take this in place of the tears I should one day shed,
as they would be far more useless to you.
Would you ever believe what you mean to me?
I'll never be able to say...
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I cant think of any more for this yet, but when it is done I will tell you.
This was written for kadydid. Please read his comment.
Written July 3rd, 2005
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Wonderfully written.Thanks for entering and good luck
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Brilliantly written very heart felt and very powerful an angelic voice reaches out from the heavens and touches a soul with her wings of poetry awsome write thank you for leeting me read you work..
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stop it you two, your making me whispy!
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wonderful
My poetry is lame
But, I love you just the same
You've given me more than you know
When I read this I wept
but I feel so inept
please accept this heartfelt bravo
I love you Kyleen and I hope we can share many more sunny days before the rain falls.
Kirk -
this is a lovely poem. You did magnificent with describing how important he is to you. By the way, thanks for commenting on my poem. I appreciate it. Keep up the great work! xXxXx <3 *Jordan**
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I know that feeling of worrying about weather changes. One day it went from the most beautiful day in my lfie and the next it was graveyard balck.
This is a great write. I do not think you need to add or change anything!
Welcome to allpeotry and I hope you read and write your computer weary. There are some awesome poets on this site and happens, a favorite of mine had me take a look! -
im sure he knows...great poem, great Neice
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Very emotional write, and reminds me of some personal experiences. 2 years ago yesterday my brother died, and I had seen it coming in so many ways.
One's personal weather. Indeed, a great thought...
peace
doug
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the weather of oneself connected to a person--- what a lovely, unusual concept.
even as it is written, i think this is a complete thought and powerful at that- but then again, i can really relate to this in terms of my brother... so i think it carries more impact for me. either way, brilliant job. ---ryn
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