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Where Did It Go

I loved it
I loved the way we were together
I loved how we knew what each other was going to say before we said it
All those long night phone calls about things only we understood
I loved how people said look there they are
The friends that never leave each others side

Where did everything go?
We aren't together as much
And i have no clue what your thinking
The memories of the phone calls are fading
You arent there for people to get jelious over the friendship we have/had

I want it back

Turn the light on in this dark room
Only you can do it
Its only you that brings tears to my eyes at night
You are the one i sneak out for

But your not that close anymore
Are we falling apart?
Please if we are tell me
Tell me how you feel
Don't make me guess
Be honest so i know where i stand

So maybe you can get back to me on that
Because if i have to look at a another tissue because of you
I wont know what to do

Author notes

FOR YOU!!! I LOVE YOU!!!
for a friend that lost the words to say this!
Written July 3rd, 2005

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  • kay1719
    July 11, 2005
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    wow.. this is GREAT! sounds exactly like something i went through a while ago. this is awesome!! i can tell it came straight from the heart!! great write.. i loved it!!
    *kAYLA


  • CountryLullaby
    July 3, 2005
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    thank you but it really isnt about me but i really appritiate it though!

    the authors comment might clear it up!lol

    ~*CASEY*~


  • Dark Magician
    July 3, 2005
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    Wonderful

    You must miss this friend. You are expressing you're pain this way. This is the easiest way to get the pain off your shoulders.