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the end

The end of days, end of the world
beginning and end completing the circle
well thats what some people seem to believe,
earth quakes, hurricanes, stormy violent seas.
Thats what they said sum 2000 years past
whay they say, is the next five years are our last
just a thought or a guess, few understand
A testament to be made for those who can.
What i know is im seeing the winds blow
alot harder this year than the year befor
which says to me that it just might be
a tragedy of such magnitude, you just wont believe
a planet containing nothing more than black skies and death
A cold desolate mother earth, alone, none of her children left.

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a thought rattling around in my head
Written July 3rd, 2005

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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    November 23, 2005
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    Very nice work. -Al