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Lies.

Lies.
All I've been getting from you.
What happened to the truth?

Coincidences.
They're so easy to see.
Do you think I'm that oblivious?

Lies.
They hurt more than the truth.
Do you want me to hate you?

Coincidences.
You should learn.. I caught on.
Are you really that vain?

Lies.
This place is full of them.
Is there anywhere else to go?

Coincidences.
This has happened before, with the same culprits.
How did I know that it would happen again?

Tell the truth. Grow up.
You sadden and disgust me. Both of you.
"Lie to me. It's doesn't matter anymore."

Author notes

Yeah... I know. It sucks. I wrote it, I read it. It sucks. But I don't care.  It's just to help send the message that I hate being lied to, and I'm not as stupid as I seem.

Written July 3rd, 2005

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  • Loveable Cherub
    August 23, 2005
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    What do you mean sort of? ... A DIFFERENT PERSON IS LYING TO LYLE? oh how sad...
    tell me the gory details.


  • CoyoteLyle
    August 17, 2005
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    Well.. it's sorta about you-know-who.... But it really isn't. It's about a different person.

    I've been meaning to write more, but nothing's been coming to mind as of late. Kinda disappointing, really.
    I seem to always think of little things at work, or in my truck, but I forget them before I get home.
    Edited on Aug 17, 11:01 p.m. because ''.

  • Loveable Cherub
    August 16, 2005
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    ooo ooo ooooooo
    is this about you-know-who?

    it's a pretty good poem, even though you don't like it much. i like the rhythm you have with it beginning with lies and coincidences.

    keep writing!! i've been missin ya man!


  • CoyoteLyle
    July 11, 2005
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    Thank you.

  • justifiedsmile
    July 11, 2005
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    I won't lie to you Kyle... I love you buddie. But honestly... great write.


  • CoyoteLyle
    July 3, 2005
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    Yeah... That's "friends" for ya.


  • CoyoteLyle
    July 3, 2005
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    Thanks. That's really all it is, is emotion.

  • Readerrach
    July 3, 2005
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    que triste

    wow, i'm sorry...


  • jeanimoo
    July 3, 2005
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    Wonderful

    full of emotional, a great piece. Heartfelt and thank you for sharing this and showing honesty. Write on!!!!!

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