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Choosen by an angel

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There’s a nursery in heaven

up in the sky
Where St Gerard

teaches Baby Angels to fly.

One bright day

while being taught
a Baby angel had a thought,
she’d seen some clouds
to them she’d stray
bounced up and down

and decided to stay.
Now God he sighed,
”I’ve had enough!
this baby angel

is just too much.
Baby angels are

supposed to fly
But this little lady

refuses to comply.”
After her lessons
a walk she would go
and peep through a cloud

to the earth below.
She saw a woman with lovely hair
And said to herself
“Yes! I want her.”
She ran to God with 

her wish to declare,
and showed him the pretty woman
With lovely hair.
“Can I look like that, have the same hair,
can she be my Mummy?
I’ll love her I swear.”
Now God he thought long
then gave into defeat
and sent this little Angel
to her Mummy to meet.


Dedicated to all unmarried mother’s
Who where presented with a gift from above.
And remember...The child chooses the parent!
Dolores Craig ©

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For the unmarried mother's... enjoy your baby because they chose you!

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  • McRae by nature
    August 18

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    I think that this is really precious, but I do not see the connection between this piece and the theme of my contest. It won't win a prize unfortunatly, but I am glad that I got to read it

    Thanks


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    August 14

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    this is so beautiful, and moving i had not thought of it that way,
    and i do have to agree,

    blessings

    Rend


  • Mrs. C.
    August 16, 2008
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    thank you so much for entering my contest


  • Gods Lil Warrior
    June 23, 2008
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    This is a lovely poem.


  • allfaith
    March 13, 2008
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    wow this is really amazing and sweet, ty for entering and goodluck


  • xorandomxo
    December 27, 2007

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    wow this is so sweet.
    i love:
    A walk she would go
    And peep through a cloud to the earth below.
    She saw a woman with long blonde hair
    And said to herself
    “Yes! I want her.”
    She ran off to God to declare,
    And showed him the pretty woman
    With long blonde hair.
    “Can I look like that, have the same hair,
    Can she be my Mummy?
    I’ll love her I swear.”


    its just so WOW and it makes
    mums feel special to know the child they have chose them.


  • Angelwatchingme
    September 3, 2007

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    This poem made me smile and laugh a little, as it brought back memories of when, I was little, how I used to believe that a baby was a little fallen angel given to us by God, I used to think, you're gonna laugh, that the reason God gave it to us was because it's wings broke off. So it needed care-takers, but once it got here, it couldn't recall it's days in heaven. Well, anyway, thank you for sharing!!


  • Pureisolation
    March 31, 2007
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    i really liked how you wrote this poem. One of the parts i liked particullarly, was

    And peep through a cloud to the earth below.
    She saw a woman with long blonde hair
    And said to herself
    “Yes! I want her.”

    good job and good luck in the contest.


  • Dirty and Broken
    March 25, 2007
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    oh, that's so sweet
    thanks for entering


  • Princess Amy
    February 27, 2007
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    Thank you for entering I liked your poem.. Good luck in my contest..


  • -Ink Artist-
    January 12, 2007
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    Inspiring

    This is a truly inspiring write! You've given a beautiful gift to all teen mothers, all mothers for that matter, that our children choose us. Wonderfully written and very insightful. Beautiful! Thanks for your entry and good luck!

    ~Lori


  • parenchma
    November 21, 2006
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    I like your attitude, and your style! You are up mighty late!


  • jezz-aussi
    July 2, 2005
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    Aww this is so sweet and cute! And your imagery...I can actually see this happening hehe. It could of course just be my overly vivid imagination especially when it comes to heavenly things lol, but yeah!

    Love and light,

    Jenna

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