Love to hate
the way you…
Make me crave for your touch
And the effect your kisses have
Love to hate
the way you…
Invaded my secret place
Yet making me still feel safe
Love to hate
the way you…
Embedded yourself in my head
Knowing what I think
Love to hate
the way you…
Became in tune with my emotions
Leaving me feeling exposed
Love to hate
the way you…
Swim through my veins
Sliding past every wall
Love to hate
the way you…
Fill me completely
Even when we are apart
Love to hate
the way you…
Make me want to scream
But also cause me to smile
Love to hate
the way you….
Cause me to open up to you
And talk of dormant feelings
Love to hate
the way you…
Love me unconditionally
And care beyond words
Love to hate
the way you…
Cause tears of love to
Fall from my eyes
Love to hate
the way you…
Make tender love to me
whisper promises in my ear
Love to hate
the way…
I don’t really hate
Anything you do
Author notes
Written July 2nd, 2005
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very nice piece you have written here.....I like your style of writing and hope to read more of your wonderful work.......keep it up, you are doing great!
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Guilty of feelings th3ese same emotions. I really don't like the style however I enjoyed the message you were getting across.
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Everything about love is a love/hate thing. What is it they say... for every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction. So that pretty well explains love!
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I've had to read this one a bunch of times to figure out where you were going with it. I like it a lot, but I'm still stuck on a few different ways to read it, and which one you intended.
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aww another sweet endearing pen from your talented hand. You getting quite good as a writer you truly are and this is brimming with emotion and the way you structured the refrained line was brilliant great job
love and light
blaze
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I really love this poem. It flows together very well and I love the twist at the end. Very powerful and emotional. Descriptive as well. Good job!
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the line format was cool, but hey, i'm a sucker for out of the ordinary formats. great message, especially liked the last stanza. now all i have to do is fall in love so i can feel all of that. easier said than done, but oh well. good luck with your future poetry excursions and such.
God Bless,
Chris -
good writing it flows so well and ive never read one written so opposite of its self. very nice
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Great write i enjoyed it mucho
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great write. some poems like this tend to be so mundane and boring but I like the way you used your emotions and the word choice. The line structure helps convey your message as well good job
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i love it ..it flows so nicely .great write
chery
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