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Drips and Drabs


The incessant drip, drip, drip had proved effective in fostering the insanity that had threatened to overtake him these last few hours.  It had not been nearly as effective at driving him mad, however, as the sound of his own screams echoing through the room as his blood drained one drop at a time through the thousand tiny cuts that now decorated his body.

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Written July 2nd, 2005

A contest entry

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  • Dimitri Elesk
    October 31, 2006
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    A very provocative and thought provoking work. So enchanting if it were alive I'd marry it, have several kids and turn them loose on the world to slaughter and destroy every person that holds breath in their lungs. And that's saying a lot, do I look like I want to be fucking married? Especially to someone so short.

    But on a serious note,
    A lovely work that evokes questions till the sum of the end. Quite catching.


  • Psycho Jess
    April 17, 2006
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    Woah. unsexypenguin is right - this is a really creepy poem. It sent a siver down my spine and made me feel suddenly very uncomfortable. lol. So thumbs up from me! . It is a fantastic poem *even if it is the short of thing that will give me nightmeres* .
    JESSx

  • herbal gardens
    July 8, 2005
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    grusome

    I liked this too, damned this was a fun contest...


  • General Watson
    July 7, 2005
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    Thumbs up

    Wow. Really well done.


  • unsexypenguin
    July 3, 2005
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    If you'd like to know I'll tell you that part of the movie, it's not a big part they just mention it, it's very very very creepy.

  • QuinnTessEntity
    July 3, 2005
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    I never actually saw SAW, so I am not sure which part you are referring to, but since I heard that it was one friggin' creepy film, I will take that as a compliment. Thank you for the comment.
    Cheers!

  • unsexypenguin
    July 2, 2005
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    EEEEK! This contest is waaaaay creepier than I expected. This was awesome, kinda reminds me of that one part off of SAW. This is great I really get the image in my mind. The first sentence is kinda like well yea that's no big deal, but then you find out what the dripping is in the second and you're like OMFG!! *Shivers* This truly is a horrible way to die. Thank you for entering.

    -Miranda

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