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Boys and girls.

BOY: I saw her today
GIRL: I saw him today

BOY: It seems like its been forever
GIRL: I wonder if he still cares

BOY: She looks better than before
GIRL: I couldn't stop staring at him

BOY: I asked her how things were going
GIRL: I asked about his new girlfriend

BOY: I'd choose her over any girl I'm with
GIRL: He's probably really happy right now

BOY: I couldn't look at her without starting to cry
GIRL: He couldn't even look at me

BOY: I told her I miss her
GIRL: He doesn't mean it

BOY: I meant it
GIRL: He didn't mean it

BOY: I love her
GIRL: He loves his new girlfriend

BOY: I held her for the last time
GIRL: He gave me a friendly hug

BOY: Then I went home and cried
GIRL: Then I went home and cried

BOY: I lost her
GIRL: I still love him

Author notes

If you love someone you should let them know before it's to late and they are gone.

I'm going to be honest, i didn't write this poem. My friend Alyssa wrote it and she asked me to put it in here so i did.
Written July 2nd, 2005

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  • kelleyk3
    July 2, 2005
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    ahhh this is soooo effin sad! i think i've heard it from somewhere tho... but I really like it! good job!


  • parasol
    July 2, 2005
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    Deep and Sad

    This poem is so sad and completely true. *cries* Yes, I actually cried. I lost the chance of being with the boy I love so much. I can really relate to this. I love this poem so much!!! Very well written and with lots of meaning! Excellent job!!!
    - Morbid Poet