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You've always known

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You've always known how much I love you
how my heart tells me you'll always be true.
one touch is all it takes to set me on fire
that starts the flames burning with desire.

I yearn to be with you, stand by your side
when we speak my heart melts inside.
the day is coming my love when we meet
something to look forward to my sweet.

To see you standing there I run to your arms
how I love to succumb to your charms,
you are the man I've waited for
you are the one that makes my heart soar.

Let me stay with you for the rest of our life
I promise forever to be a good wife.
The life we will share won't always be rosy
but I promise you we'll always be happy.








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HMMMM, Vic says to dedicate this to him.
here you are Vic, it's in my Author's column
Written July 2nd, 2005

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  • jenelda silver member
    July 25, 2005
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    Hey Vic, if you look, it's in the Authors Column

    Jenni


  • eternalpoet
    July 3, 2005
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    5 Stars *****

    how dare brian give u roses?? (just joking )

    nice nice write.. lol.. did you just see how much applauds our poem got??did you just see on it?? well.. its on the highest appluaded poems of the week list.. .. tee hee..

    about this poem.. you know when you rhyme.. i have to like the poem.. .. soo nice nice poem.. so lovely poem.. just you forgot you write that it is dedicated to me in the author's comment.. .. (bad bad jennifer)

    though.. my dear pluffy pluffy spongey doll.. i loved this poem.. sorry to be late.. to comment.. but i am glad that i read it.. and i will get on this page again.. i wont the author's comment changed

    nice write

    thanks for sharing

    hugs and kisses

    gives choco

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.... just keep it up ........ your humble little friend....... ........ ............ ............. - vic ( who else? )

  • Poet7376
    July 2, 2005
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    jennifer...how sweet love is and its fullfilling promise of togetherness forever....love, l'amour, is very beautiful....brian....