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i never got to know you!

i didn't really know you , though you meant the world to me!
i wish you knew the pain i was going through, i wish you could just see!
when i was around you i got this special drift,
but that's all gone now , gone with you over the that cliff,
your life was taken, it was theft,
now i have to live in the tragedy of you death!
goodbye Julian
xxx

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Written July 2nd, 2005

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  • chipmunk 666
    December 8, 2005
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    well that has to suck balls to lose sombody when my grandma died thats when i snaped and became me today so ur like me but im like a outcast its just me and my gutar now. peace :-(


  • Things Fall Apart
    July 3, 2005
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    Very deep wonderful poem. I like how you really show how you feel. Great job.


  • MissPumpkinKing
    July 2, 2005
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    awh flora this is a sad poem.. it hurts so much when someone you like dies. i mean one of my boyfriends not a proper boyfriend killed himself and it hurt me so much because their was so much i wanted to know about him but it could never happen
    Alex xxx

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    July 2, 2005
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    SAD BUT GOOD

    Awwww, how sad. I know it hurts when someone dies before you get the chance to know them. I felt that way when my uncle died. He was a most loving and gentle man, yet I never got the chance to see that for myself. Oh well, that's life I guess.
    Excellent write. Well done!
    Brian