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Head for the Waves

Verse 1:
I showed up at your back door at 2am
tears down my face and an ache in my heart
Another one gone
but he left Me this time
I swear love and life has it in for me.

Verse 2:
I’m so done trying anyhow,
the future looks bleak without the things that used to be
our little things, the things we said we’d never forget
are now drifting away in my mind

Chorus:
Could you please cradle me like my mother never did
Push my hair back and kiss my forehead

Don’t say a word, don’t spoil the moment
lets get in the car and head for the waves
Don’t say a word, don’t spoil the moment
Just get the car and head for the waves.


Verse 3:
I’m at your back door at 2am again
I miss when i showed up here smiling
we’d pile in your car and sing  the whole way there
heading to the waves, the four of us,


bridge:
I’m watching my days go by
sometimes learning a lesson of life
Trail and error sucks when its always error
patience is a virtue sure, but I still don’t have any

Verse 4:
I can’t garuntee I won’t be at your back door tomarrow
with a cigarette in my hand, choaking back my tears
I’ve no where else to go
no where like here in your arms.  

Just get in the car and head for the waves
Head for the waves

hampster!!!

Author notes

This has some personal meaning to me, but not all of it. No one left me, well, yet at least. heh
Written July 2nd, 2005

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  • Tonerman
    July 3, 2005
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    I hope you feel better, things will work out. Thus is the way of life...


  • shatteredprince
    July 3, 2005
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    Hey, this is awesome, a very emotional write that I used to be able to relate to. I can still feel what its like, more or less anyway, but I've given up. I'd rather be alone now. The subtle repetition was well done, the diction was wonderful, and emotion was potent. Good to be reading more of your stuff again.

    the commador

  • xXxWorshipMe27xXx
    July 2, 2005
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    this is a really good write


  • dregs
    July 2, 2005
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    pretty cool miserable heart under foot poem. i found a mistake
    "Puch my hair back and kiss my forehead" i think is push...actually there were a few more just spelling errors, the poem really was a good read..i've been there. spell check and you're good to go.