The sisters were scheming into the night
they new the full moon would rise so bright
Gypsies at heart roaming throughout the lands
stealing silver goblets and gold wedding bands
Capturing brokenhearted fools along the way
their unsuspecting lovers fall to their prey
use and abuse them till they are needed no more
then back to their broken hearts just as before
Robbed of their riches and their dignity too
beware for these gypsies will devour you
they tempt you with passion and with sin
losing your soul as temptation sets in
A fantasy come true on a moonlit night
they promise you the moon shining bright
you will be left on your knees a broken man
when you see them smile run fast as you can
That is the tale of gypsy sisters on the prowl
the love turns your smile into a scowl
as your lesson learned comes much to late
for your soul is theirs as they celebrate
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Written July 1st, 2005
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Amazing, as usual!
Congratulations on the silver. This was amazing for the short time you had to create it. You sure do have a lot going on in your head. Great job! Love, Linny -
Hey sAANDY, wOW, THIS SURE WAS AN INTRIGUING PIECE
I had fun reading this one, very wonderfully penned
Keep on writing
Di
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I like the flow and the moral of this piece, you have one fine poem if I do say so myself. Great story to it.
Natalia -
LOL Bravo! Bravo! Excellent flow to this piece. So very intriguing and I must say I adore it! Yes, you must watch those Gypsies, for once they were regarding highly among royality, only to be tramped upon by the very same in the name of the cross (and a few others). The Gypsy were once and still are very proud people, and once the creme de la creme. People often forget that now, so beware their curse, they earned the right LOL Awesome job on this piece! A great tale woven and very much enjoyed
Blessings, Gypsy
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Hm interesting tale. I love reading poems that tell stories. Very nice!
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WONDERFUL COMMENT
Thank you for the nice comment. It is always appreciated. And it is always a pleasure to come on in the morning and read your comments. Hope you have a wonderful weekend. I said a prayer this morning like you asked for your family. God Bless you and your family. Peace and happiness to you all.
Sandy
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Thank you for the wonderful comment. Always appreciated!!! God Bless take care, Sandy
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Excellent
Well done my friend! That is a wonderful story and I like the rhythm that you used. It was an easy read and fun. There is also a lot of truth woven in amongst the words. Bravo. -
Wow dear mum...
thats cool...I really admire your poems..
they are wonderful and this one is fantastic..
Luv
Neha
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Yippeee Sandygram this is S U P E R!!!! I will admit I have read all the others up to you and I am soooo glad to see someone else went a different route as I did. I was beginning to feel a bit an outcast! LOL This is as I have said S U P E R and the tale it tells most enjoyable! Good luck to you in the contest!
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Wonderfully done, you have created a beautiful tale.
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