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Vanilla Stone

Parable stones like ancient ruins
Absorbing the vien like like vines
That nature fought to produce

It was a small courtyard,
or would have been if it wasn't forgotten
Fountains were positioned in each corner
framing the small pool in the middle

Ivy from oblivion,
roots hiding in the moonlight,
That reflection like purity,
Stemming from the streams,
Flows like railway,
Always moving,
and you heard it

This place,
layered, leveled, and cool
Beauty infected vanilla stone
It had a purpose,
once,
But it didn't matter
It was forgotten,
Buried in a world of concrete


It wasn't there,
because no one believed it was.

Author notes

Umm..well, I gave it a shot. Probably rushed it. But there ya go.
Written July 1st, 2005

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