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Abyss

Let’s end this with a fresh start;
Wipe away all the hurt and the pain
And the perfection that you put me through
Cause the bad only makes the good more beautiful
And the beauty only makes this ache more acute.
Drown me in this misery; burn me in my mistakes.
Suffocate me in your indifference; cut me with regret-
Just, take my life the way you took back your love.
Besides, you’ve already stolen my heart, my soul, my love.
I came crawling back, but you just walked further away.
Time only widens the gap between love and hate, and I fear
You, or I (or both) are about to be lost in that abyss.

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Oh god, I miss him. Love hurts if you're living it alone.
Written July 1st, 2005

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