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Not Any More

I used to love you but
Now I don't
I did the other month
But you are nothing now.

You took my heart
And tore it up
With all those lies
That you told.

When I think about it
I don't understand
Why I gave myself to you
As I did.

As the song says
Every day I love you less and less
And now I understand why,
I don't need you.

You are nothing now
I have moved on
You can't use me anymore
Find yourself another toy.

Author notes

Every day i love you less and less.
Just makes me think about things.......I rote a poem like this a wile ago and then changed sum stanzas and added in the fourth one bcos that is what this song makes me feel like
Written July 1st, 2005

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  • sky black
    July 18, 2005
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    i liked this one, very well written, it was nicely done..and why does it seem familiar...it was good and well written like i said good luck. l8az love ya sky xxxx


  • Heather.x
    July 2, 2005
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    forgot too applaud oops!


  • Heather.x
    July 2, 2005
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    wow! okay this is good! lol. would say good luck but you really dont need it with this! lol. xoxox