Hope

Narrow or wide
Heaven or hell

So many choices

Right or wrong
Good or bad
Love or hate

So many choices.

What should I choose?
The world screams its' lies,
pulling at my soul

Who can save me?
Who can show me the way?
Who can show me the path to take?

I am so lost and alone
Where is my guide on this journey?

Narrow. Heaven.
My choice is made

Right. Good. Love.
It was never my choice to begin with

Fragments of free will running through my veins.
To be with the Creator.. there is no other choice.

Author notes

I'm not sure what this is... a collection of my random thoughts. I wanted to try to express them. It's nowhere near done--I want to add more and edit what I have already. But this will work for a 1st draft.
Written July 1st, 2005

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September 9, 2005
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Excellent
You expressed your feelings well on this piece and conveyed them into words very well. The flow to it was nice and I enjoyed reading it. Excellent write.
~Elba~
PsychoPuppet
July 21, 2005
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This is a great poem. I tend to make wrong choices in the world. lol this was a great poem though keep writting^_^

-Amber-
Lencio Rodrigues
July 5, 2005
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A wonderful choice!!! Great poem you have posted here. Sometimes in our day to day busy world we tend to make the worng choices. This is an eye opener, and a very inspiring write you have posted here. Thanks for sharing it.
BriorRose
July 1, 2005
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well i still like it anyways!! it's very good!!
keep up the good work!!
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~Chelsea~* *