For however insomuch as we are all
Ungratefully and sinfully gathered together in Thy fucking name
Cuntwise of the dead jewgod
Know ye that a lump of fecal matter
Can be squeezed out of Thy glorious anal
Hole, which is in the heart of the living god, a veritable
Rectangular thing, believe me baby,
I know of what I speak and, by the way, old Edna
Sweetlove, that naughty piece of horseflesh, loves
To suck big black knobs.
Author notes
Written July 1st, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Very naughty and exquisite poems by no win no fee.
450 points, ended July 18, 2007, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Ah, this remindeth me of school.....
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I loved this and Im sure Edna would too. thanks for entering and good luck
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Did you like the acrostic?
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PERSONALLY ... I appreciated the acrostic. At least you can write in full words [instead of 2 and 4 for to and four *cough* points up ^^^]. ANYway - I would have been touched by such a poem with my name. Maybe that's me.
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as far as acrostics go that is horrible i know it was most likely wrote 4 effect and you want me 2 get upset over it but i wont but i will say that i wont not be reading any more of your work. i saw your name in a contest i entered i shouldve known that what to expect
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Karl Marx was, of course, a motherfucker. Nietsche was straight on (note the spelling). He also said quite a few other things too.
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Interesting
The famous philosopher, economist Karl Marx once said, "Religion is the opiate of the masses." Nietszche the famous existentialist once said, "God is dead." Well those two men defined there eras. I think this piece defines an era today of people being corrupted and not knowing what religion exactly is. -
Hold on, NO ONE has reversed the fucking acrostic. Bollox. Oh well, one person did, but the other didn't. Dreadful poem but quite funny and I like the message. Seeing I have applauded the others, here's likewise. The above comment appears to be crazy...............conscription?
Edited on Jul 04, 6:49 p.m. because ''. -
This was a heart fely piece, but did not follow the instructions of reversing the acrostic. Easily redone, if you are interested. Interesting that this form evades close check by the powers of conscription.
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pftttttt. (that was the sound of my dainty fart)
which is all the comment I can think of to say about this.
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