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Regaining My Child

Too fast paced life...
Run here and there...
Becoming numb...
Forgetting to care...

Just takes one moment...
Looking into young eyes...
To find out...
What I’ve missed inside...

Now must relearn...
What she’s willing to teach...
Must start to play...
‘For it’s out reach...

Get over now...
Past sorrow and pain...
Hold a small hand...
See what a gain...

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Written March 30th, 2005

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  • VylotteRose
    July 20, 2005
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    You're too kind!

    Thank you again my kindred spirit...I can't wait for the book to come out with our poetry in it...I ordered a copy for me and one for Steve also...

  • surrealer engel
    July 19, 2005
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    such beautiful words...