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Symphony Of The Sea

The smoky breath of Poseidon,
Billowing over wintered wings.
Gracefully touched by ice maidens,
Silent thoughts magically sing.

The mother's crystalline wine,
Flows over verdant isles.
Glimmering like an ancient shrine,
A mirror expanding endless miles.

A melody floats upon the tides,
Lingering within cool sprays.
Upon creamy foam the tune rides,
And silver notes gently raise.

Sweetened with an aqua hue,
The mermaid song plays on.
Secrets of the depths are viewed,
Unlocked by the coming dawn.

A symphony soars within the light,
Sea nymph voices floating high.
Within the sound I hear her might,
Echoing where ocean meets sky.

The crystal opera begins to fade,
Becoming now a hymn of the sea.
Memories fall in a final cascade,
Reminding that the song shall always be.

Author notes

Nature is a beautiful thing. It should not be denied praise. So it is up to us poets to praise it!
Written July 1st, 2005

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  • JupiterIris
    July 1, 2005
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    Charming and thoughtful. Luck.


  • southpaw
    July 1, 2005
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    SimpleComplexity
    what a great poem
    you captured the sea with your words
    i really enjoyed reading this
    keep it up

    southpaw