The sentence that means the most
was cut off just minutes ago
I tried to tell you I love you
but i guess you didn't even know
You keep saying we never hang out
and of course every time i agree
But I'm not the one making and breaking
these empty promises and guarantees
The hardest thing for me right now
is having a mirror in front of my face
I wish i could get rid of it all
Push "DELETE", "UNDO", or "ERASE"
My life is so much different
than you would ever think
And as the last drop of blood falls
"I love you" will be written in red ink
Author notes
so if you didnt know the first two paragraphs are about two different people. and i guess thats all. havent been feeling the best lately but yeah. comment if you read it.
Written June 30th, 2005
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holy shit this is awesome
wow your rhyming completely flowed didnt sound forced or anything
geeze.. I think this is going to be the start of a reading binge of your work... 2 down..
You keep saying we never hang out
and of course every time i agree
But I'm not the one making and breaking
these empty promises and guarantees
I cannot stress how much I feel you here... holy freakin hell
sorry for my potty mouth
haha great write -
this is really good karina... and i love you forever...but it makes me sad
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