Toupee or not Toupee
Shall I wear a wig today.
To pay or not to pay
Shall I pay my bills today.
To pee or not to pee
In my pants or on a tree.
To plea or not to plea
Shall I seek forgiveness from thee.
To flee or not to flee
Shall I stay and fight with thee.
To prey or not to prey
Shall I hunt for dear today
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Written June 30th, 2005
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- ANY THING by serenity silvermoon.
430 points, ended May 10, 2007, 145 entries
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I love it. Taking something someone previously wrote and redoing it in a humorous way, in my opinion is one of the best forms of comic entertainment. You did great! Bravo!
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On a repeat visit, since you like Hamlet's soliloquy, may I direct you to my poem on this very subject? allpoetry.com/story/1426235 ????
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lol. don't let anyone get you down...it's a nice change from all the sad stuff people post here usually. u made me smile.
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Yes, well. Quite amusing in a quiet way, but (I almost hesitate to say this) not completely original. There may well have been 100s of people who have quipped similar little parodies, but that's not to say this one's not well executed.
The first stanza is very funny and original, the last stanza is unfortunately the weakest I feel.
Perhaps....
To shit or not to shit
But I have no choice in it. -
Alright or not Alright
I think I will critic this write.
To be or not to be
It's very funny poetry
To read or not to read
I'm very glad I did indeed!
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these are pretty good, it was funny. very humorus I got a good tickle out of them lol. Great job!
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