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the unfinished sadness part three

i should be numb to the pain
happiness is what you gain
you're just so fine without me
so i'll just let you be
i'm no longer the woman you desire
let's just watch how things transpire
when i treat you like you're no one
then we'll see who is having fun
you think that from someone else you can get what i give you?
well, just so you know, i can do that too.

Author notes

ok i was drunk when i posted and wrote this poem...and i guess i was under jennifer's name..because it got posted there soehow..all though i could've sworn i was logged on under my name...but i was drunk...lol...
Written June 30th, 2005

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