People walk by, completely unaware,
of the child encaptured in a solemn stare,
blank-faced, and alone,with no one to turn to,
hiding in the shadows, camoflauged through and through.
people bustle along the street,
noisy,with plenty of people to meet,
but they ingore her, they leave her out,
shes invisble,with a hovering rain-cloud,
stay away from the storms,they say,
don't get caught up, she's just alone,it's her way,
and one day, she'll be ok. but it's not true.
how would they know? what do they do?
they don't care, the never will,
until the day she leaves her window sill,
never to be seen again, flying on the wings of death,
gasping her last fatal breath,
seething with revenge,for those who deserted her,
they will pay for her crimson blur,
lingering upon the stones, and inside the mind,
of anyone who added to her crime,
of wanting the end, of needing life no more,
revenge is sweet,and she will live on...
camoflauged no more
Author notes
this is one of my only poems which actually rhymes! 
Written June 30th, 2005
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ooooooooooooh this is so sad
i like the way it rhymes, it adds EFFECT *nods* this is so beautiful but so depressing...well, keep at it, you write awesome poetry! love ya
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This was good. Many of my poems rhyme and I love rhymes. It was sad but I was able to relate this some what to the "stoop boy" in the cartoon "Hey Arnold". No one should take their own life because the feel invisible because that person should make themself stand out and prove the world wrong. Good Job Good write Good night.
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awww thats really sad..it reminds me of the ring lol. I like the introduction, its v intreging..well done the rhymes gr8! It works well. I like the line "never to be seen again, flying on the wings of death" It creates such a vivd image in my mind. Like all of your work, this wrocks. Keep it up or i'll make you hehe..not kidding tho!
xxkatexx
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