Tonight if the time is right.
I want to hold you.
Feel your body close to mine.
Never to let you go.
Can I kiss you
And have a taste of your love?
You’re driving me crazy!
So I’ll ask you again.
May we be lovers
And fill the night with romance?
I just want a taste of your love.
Is that too much to ask?
For now is the moment to live
Not tomorrow.
For tomorrow may never come.
Yes…
We’ll take things slowly.
I won’t ask for promises.
But this I must know.
Does love live in your heart?
And if it does.
May I share a taste of your love?
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Written June 30th, 2005
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Really, really nice
I like the part that says 'For now is the moment to live Not tomorrow' -
the title is what attracted me at first glance...the piece itself is very touching,very soulful....makes the heart beat all the quicker...
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I love the way you propose love to this woman!!! Beautiful sidey
Peace and Love
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This poem is a very passionate poem indeed and so filled with love that it's overflowing. I love it. You did an astounding job with this piece of poetry friend. God bless you in all that you do and write and keep up the excellent work. I loved this amazing poem.
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This one speaks to me of passion. Smoldering under the surface in eager anticipation, ready to celebrate the moment. Indeed. Sweet and seductive all at the same time. Aloha to you from this side of paradise found.. alisa ;-)
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So romantic and erotic. If I was your woman I would be completely speechless. Good writes and may many more continue to rest easy on your mind.
Beka
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Wow! A truely romantic poem! Beautifully done!
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Wonderul poem. Every stanza screams love. Imagery and passion is heartfelt here. Thanks for sharing this poem. ~Sie
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I like this one and I am going to look at some others.
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Beautiful
Such a beautiful touch of romance. To me this appears to truly come directly from your heart. -
well when you ask so darn sweetly,how could i say no.it's the sincerity that the write brings to mind for me.it holds so much passion that it would be believable to hear it flow from the right person's lips.you are a true poet.
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A wonderfully sweet and beautiful expression of love. I quite enjoyed the glimpse into your heart. If I didn't know better I might think you to be a hopeless romantic.
Blessings
celticmoon -
This is a good poem and yes love lives in my heart.
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"Does love live in your heart?
And if it does.
May I share a taste of your love?"
Outstanding ending lines! You continue to impress me with your work!
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I love the imagery that enters my mind whe I read the words, "taste of your love". Love is something that certainly concumes us in such a way that it's sooo much more than just a 'feeling'. It is indeed a taste, a scent and a sound... especially that loud thunderous thumping of the heart when your loved one is near or says just the right thing at just the right time. This is wonderful Bill.
♥ Kimberly -
Oooh! This is very nice. So romanticly nice! Kinda puts you in the mood for love. SIGH!
By the way, I love your background! May I borrow, if it's alright with you?
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I love this..I don't know..something about the Taste of your Love line that got me. Excellent piece.
~Carrie
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What a beautiful write, Bill. Well done.
I truely enjoyed this piece...
Hugs & Laughter
Pat -
Wonderfully expressive write. If it were written to me by that someone special I would probably faint dead away...lol. The background fits in so well with this piece it takes ones breathe away. Love it! rose
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Youdo write lovely and beautiful love poetry, my dear friend, Bill...........
I liked this very much.....
"Can I kiss you
And have a taste of your love?
You’re driving me crazy!
So I’ll ask you again.
May we be lovers
And fill the night with romance?
I just want a taste of your love.
Is that too much to ask?"
ENY/TES
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i love how tender and sweet this is but gently urgent - its just lovely.
Shanelle -
I like the way you didn't really make anything rhyme all too much but it still rhymed in some places, and i think that it's well done. good write.
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