Our bodies glowing
by candlelight,
caressing, fondling
kissing...
Passion warming,
our bodies
melting, moaning,
relieving tension...
No other exists
only the two of us
in our own universe...
Collapsing into
each others arms,
sleeping until
the break of dawn.
Parting our way
for the day
with a kiss...
Helps make it through
it all
until the night fall.
Author notes
Written November 8th, 2001
A contest entry
- Give Me "HEAT" by Sector-Hunter.
300 points, ended January 1, 2004, 13 entries
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This is good not really what I was looking for but I enjoyed it thanks for the entry
good luck and lots of love Robin...aka SH 
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don't touch it!
Wonderful stuff. The very esence of life. -
Very well written, so much passion and love in every word....great work!
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Very nice... almost erotic(tastefull so) I like the form and the way this reads very much! ~Melissa
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beautiful..it elegant..and nice..nice work!
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