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*Convo*

Her: I dont think we should talk anymore.

Him: Why.. I need you.

Her: I dont want to make you cry anymore.

Him: So I guess "I Love You" wasn't true?

Her: Baby yes i love you.. I cant keep doing this to you..i'm not making you happy.. i dont like to hear your tears.

Him: This is all your fault.

Her: Stop saying that to me. You dont even seem to care.

Him: This all your friggen fault. Your so stupid why did you do this to us? I love you and i still do. But you gotta go and mess everything up. You ruined my life.

Her: IM FREAKIN SORRY..I gotta go, I cant deal with this.

Him: You ruined me.

Her: Oh my god. I *HAVE* to go. Im sorry!

Him: Yeah here you go with your fricken breathing again. Your a freakin hipocrite. Go friggen cut yourself. You promised me you wouldn't. But oh wait.. you break all your f'in promises anyways. You freakn ruined everything.

Her: Stop

Him: No.. F you!

Her: I have to go....

Him: Go friggen cut yourself i dont care...

Her: Remember I love you

Him: F' you
*click*

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Written June 30th, 2005

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    June 30, 2005
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    omg. jess.....did this actually happen to you! holy shyt. if it did. dont even listen to him! thats bullshyt! you know people are there for you. and can do better. sure your in love...but i mean...if he says that to you...theres gotta be something you can do about it. you shouldnt be talked to like that. but this was really good if you just made it up.